I will help the habitats stay a live. Dam alter aquatic habitats. They block fish from migrating
to place were they lay eggs . This makes a lower fish population. It also causes sediment to stay in one place.
Wednesday, February 4, 2009
Against Dams
Posted by Smantie at 11:00 AM
Labels: Dam Paragraph
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Nice, but you could have used more emotional language!
Smantie, you are the first person from your class to mention sediment, and that's an important part of the problem with dams. I liked the way that you used a complex word in your argument, it made it sound more powerful.
Mr Webb, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, New Zealand.
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