Thursday, February 5, 2009

Dams

In noel we do not need dams because we have enough water
for Electricity.we do not need dams because we do not use a lot
Electricity.

Posted by cruz at 1:47 PM  

1 Comment:

Wm Chamberlain said...

You need to not hit enter after your sentences. You need to work on capitalization, make sure the first word of the sentence is capitalize. If you read the paragraph aloud you may be able to hear some rough spots you can fix.

February 5, 2009 at 3:20 PM  

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