Imagine the most Magnificent place you ever see untouched by man. Then all of a sudden it's full of water just so someone could go boating!!It's just plain wrong!!It's destroying natural beauty!!
Plus what if the dam collapse every thing below floods killing hundreds of people!!
Wednesday, February 4, 2009
Against Dams
Posted by michael at 11:08 AM
Labels: Dam Paragraph
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You used the wrong "plain". Excellent persuasive paragraph. Fix up your last sentence, read aloud and see if you can make it better.
Michael,
I really like your argument, I know that there is a massive dam that they are building in China and I remember reading online that it was in an area prone to Earthquakes and I think if that's the case then there could be environmental disaster and a lot of people could be affected. I wonder how much thought goes into that type of planning when people decide to build dams.
Mr Webb, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, New Zealand.
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