Thursday, February 5, 2009

Save the enviroment STOP building dams.

Don't be foolish stop building dams. Building dams can hurt nature. Also building dams can change animals habitats. Men that means no fishing or hunting anymore. Don't you just love nature, and animals? If you build dams that can cause nature to not be beautiful anymore. So help save the environment no more dams. If you love nature stop building dams.

1 Comment:

Wm Chamberlain said...

You need to add commas. Read aloud to see where to put them. Good paragraph, but when you read it aloud you may be able to make it sound better.