I AM FOR DAMS BECASE IT GIVES US TV TO WACH LIKE SPONGEBOB AND IT GIVES WARM IN WINTER AND KEP US COOL IN THE SUMMER. THE END
Wednesday, February 4, 2009
i am for dam
Posted by kelsi' at 10:57 AM
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Two sentences are not four or five sentences. Do not write in all caps, it is the same as shouting.
Kelsi, Mr C is write, I think writing in caps is okay sometimes, but if you do it all the time it does seem like shouting! I though it was clever that you changed the text to red at end of your sentence though, I haven't seen anyone else from your class do that yet!
Mr Webb, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, New Zealand
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