Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Against Dams

If you were an animal would you want your house destroyed by flooding? Would you want your favorite view destroyed,or animals endangered,river fish to go away, and camp grounds destroyed? Dams can cause floods, hundreds of people die building dams,and beauty destroyed.

2 Comments:

Wm Chamberlain said...

Your commas should not have spaces between them and the word in front of them. Good paragraph.

NZWaikato said...

Terry that's a great short paragraph that has a lot of power because of the careful words that you chose! Well done a fantastic piece of writing!
Mr Webb, Melville Intermeidate, Hamilton, New Zealand.