Thursday, February 5, 2009

Dams

Dams are good.It creates power for homes,cities,farms.And people can get free water. Some people do not need to go to other places. Remove Formatting from selection

Posted by Gabriel at 2:00 PM  

1 Comment:

Wm Chamberlain said...

Your second sentence is a run-on. Delete a conjunction or two and create new sentences. Try to use more emotional words.

February 6, 2009 at 8:44 AM  

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