Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Destroy the dams

We must help to prevent dams and destroy dams because, they kill thousands of animals that were there first.And they also destroy natural beauty,just imagine Yellow Stone filled with water.They destroy the fish's habitat that they live in and they end up dieing.And if it floods and a city is below the dam and the water gos over the edge of the dam it will flood the city and kill everyone.And thats why we must help to prevent dams and destroy dams.

2 Comments:

Wm Chamberlain said...

Don't start a sentence with a conjunction like and. Yellowstone is one word. Check your spelling. Good content.

NZWaikato said...

Tristin
I liked the way in your argument that you used Yellowstone which I know is an area of great beauty and importance in America. That would make people really think about building dams by imaging it in such a special place! Great argument!
Mr Webb, Hamilton, New Zealand.